The Evengers: Chapter 1
The Evengers!
Exactly one year ago from Saturday (Feb. 13th), I began writing volume 1 of The Evengers in an effort to flesh out the characters and the world they live in. Realizing that the mod didn’t provide the player with any prominent details, range, or scope, I set out to really dig into the minds of these characters starting with the female cast members Ms. Marvel and her rival Iron Girl. Of course, I decided that I should make a real change with Jean and make her very different from the motherly role she eventually embodied in Marvel’s main universe, and I decided that Iron Girl (Tonya Starks) should be an experiment that was slowly breaking free of her restraints. Why don’t you guys tell me how well I did as I show off chapter 1? It’s a 4 page read, so make sure you have some time on your hands.
about 1 year ago
Very good beginning, Prev. Jean’s a big beyotch in this universe…LOL!
about 1 year ago
I think you did great Prem, and I’m looking forward to seeing many more chapters to follow.
Thumb’s up from me.
about 1 year ago
Thanks for the comments, guys! Dana, Jean is just misunderstood? She’s actually a very sweet girl that needs a hug. *is lying*
Heh, I tried to make all the characters different from their inspirations, so Jean became Emma-like. She’s in chapter 2 as well (and an unfinished chapter I’ve yet to really work on), so her shades might become less black and more grey (gray).